oh shit

Shit, what the Hell! But how...

8122771 What you have a problem with

8122957 she somehow manage to predict the crime scene in a matter of seconds...

HOW THE HELL DID SHE DO IT!!

8122993 Well Twilight has been reading her book and learning new and more powerful spells than she thought existed. That was why Luna was so shocked. The spell Twilight used to she what happened at the crime scene was beyond what Luna, Celestia, and their parents could ever do. Also she learned the information about the ponies and minotaurs from her time studying under Celestia. So that how she did it.

You are having huge problems with your punctuation. I have seen more than one instance where you forgot to put a space like (begging of example --> ) this,for example.There should be a space after the periods,commas,and other punctuation. (<-- End of example) Next off, I have seen you forget to put end quotes where they should be. Practice your punctuation and the like. You will get better over time, like they say, "practice makes perfect".

One last thing. Please refrain from making anymore clop/porn. Please. That kind of stuff, you have to be a very good author in general, and no offense but, you aren't exactly the most skilled author there is.

8123620 That was the only time I was planning on doing that. I just thought it needed to be there you know since the story has Jason in it. Any Friday the 13 movie has atleast one sex scene.

8123617 I will work in that.