When Rainbow Dash gets a mystery gift from Princess Twilight, it makes her body undergo...changes. You know the kind I mean. The big blue peener kind.
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Well, she didn't really beg, but I should have expected that. This was pretty good though. Maybe later Sunset could meet with them and they could have some fun together, so the Dazzlings can prove they just want to have fun.
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Oh, I actually thumbed up your story. And yeah, I do get your point, but it's not like my reviews actually have any weight whatsoever haha
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Depends what you mean by "beg." I mean, she did ask in a fairly humble manner...and also knelt down and sucked off someone she actively dislikes in exchange for a promise to "look into" what she wanted. (Which is to say, Rainbow didn't really promise much of anything. I guess even she couldn't screw up a negotiation where she's holding all the cards.)
Originally, I was thinking it wouldn't make sense to have the Dazzlings show up, because letting them anywhere near the mind-control magic would be an obviously bad idea (as Rainbow says in this chapter). But then I remembered that Sunset Shimmer can read their minds and verify that they aren't plotting anything. Which is good, because it would be a terrible shame to have them left out of this story!