I gotta say that I usually stay away from stories tagged with Dark or Thriller. But I gave it a chance seeing as this was related to Fear And Loathing In Las Vegas.

I loved the wordplay in this chapter. I could actually SEE what was happening (especially with the cement street melting). Made me feel as if I was watching the movie again pretty much, but with ponies and your characters specifically.

I gave this a favorite to keep track of upcoming chapters. Please, keep up the great work! Can't wait for more!!