After the defeat of the caribou and the toppling of their empire, the citizens of Equestria try to pick up the pieces. However, the road to recovery is not as easy for some as it is for others.
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I knew it!
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It was inevitable...
The plot thickens. With what information we got from Trixie about her capture, combined with her reaction to re-blanks and the question about Blank Foals... tells me that the pegasus filly which was with Trixie probably didn't have a good end either...
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Yeah, I'd like to believe this was least surprising plot twist in the story thus far.
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Obviously...
Well, looks like a future power grab.
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Sadly it's not the same for me as her selfishness just became too much. Chapter after chapter of her winning, acting like she was the only one who suffered or needed help and, if I remember correctly, blaming others.
Look, I do enjoy stories about flawed characters who go on journeys of self improvement. It's why A Christmas Carol is my favorite classic. And if Trixie had been the only one in that position, I wouldn't be so hard on her. But that's the thing: she wasn't. I was reading a story where all the mares were turned into sex slaves, raped daily. The country is trying to get back on its hooves yet Trixie acts like the pain she went through was somehow worse, more special than anyone else's. And where I left off, she had joined a group that seemed to want to cause trouble and point fingers for petty reasons.
Look, if you enjoy this story, them that's fine. But I gave this story eight chapters to draw me in and it didn't. Not to mention that there were other creative decisions that didn’t sit well with me
I haven't finished reading this chapter because I need a break, but here's my aneurysm list so far. I think some of these are a matter of dialect, but you know what they say: Different strokes for different folks!
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I went through and fixed the parts you showed. Thanks again for catching these. It's always helpful.
Starlight's progress not Sunset's, right?