This right here, this is a good story. Especially since it has my altime favorite pony. We don't get many fics that include Ditzy and you've written her extraordinarily well here. And the feelI I get while reading this is phenomenal. Looking forward to more.
I think I'm a little too obsessed with your story.
You troll, though! Playing around the inevitable like that. Oh well, it's no problem. Though I don't really see the point in Derpy calling Rarity babe all of a sudden. 'S just me though
Nice work, you want more feedback, come and grab me. I don't wanna be spoiling ya.
7758522 Agreed, I toyed with that for a while, and I'll probably go back and delete it. It felt right when I wrote it, but I think it hurts her characterization the more I read back over it.
This right here, this is a good story. Especially since it has my altime favorite pony. We don't get many fics that include Ditzy and you've written her extraordinarily well here. And the feelI I get while reading this is phenomenal. Looking forward to more.
7757912 And more you shall see. ;)
I think I'm a little too obsessed with your story.
You troll, though! Playing around the inevitable like that. Oh well, it's no problem.
Though I don't really see the point in Derpy calling Rarity babe all of a sudden.
'S just me though
Nice work, you want more feedback, come and grab me. I don't wanna be spoiling ya.
7758522 Agreed, I toyed with that for a while, and I'll probably go back and delete it. It felt right when I wrote it, but I think it hurts her characterization the more I read back over it.