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Oh my god! This chapter was good but I'm a bit upset she didn't fully lose herself in a blood rage with morning but like how it turned out. I do have to wonder what happened to morning? Is she gone or is she still there but very, very weak at the moment
i feel like you super rushed the ending of this chapter. While shadow has a spur of steel in her chest, her friends are yelling at her instead of helping.
It doesn't flow well.