>its members continued to vomited globs of thick semen -First, error on the verb 'to vomit', second... please, PLEASE change that word. 'Vomit' is the last thing anyone want to think about, when sex is involved ! Use 'to spew', or something.
7698795 To be fair there are some people for whom vomit is a fetish. That said, most of us don't have that fetish, and the edit is much appreciated Max.
Nice story, Max.
this is my new fantasy
>its members continued to vomited globs of thick semen
-First, error on the verb 'to vomit', second... please, PLEASE change that word. 'Vomit' is the last thing anyone want to think about, when sex is involved ! Use 'to spew', or something.
7698795 To be fair there are some people for whom vomit is a fetish. That said, most of us don't have that fetish, and the edit is much appreciated Max.