You and I have come a long way since then... And now here we are, so close to the end I can almost taste it. We’re almost free, free to live our lives the way we always wanted. So don’t give up on me now… you promised.”
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Been a while since I read something that made images float in front of my eyes as I was reading. Good job on depicting the horrors of war. I give you a 10/10 on that.
Wonder how he's going to cope with the scars of war. They don't go away, not even after decades.
First, great start.
Next, finally... loved the prequel but the profanity self-censorship in it got kinda annoying... it's worse than just omiting the swears altogether.
And, lastly... I honestly never expected you to name the protagonist.
Now, I'm just curious whether you did it, because you basically see him reborn from this event. Or if you just wanted to be able to write in third-person.