Excellent, could of lived without 'Solo Dash', but it made me laugh. Also, something I got caught doing early in my fic is not enough details. but very good so far.
808820 You're welcome. Maybe go check ur grammar. I didnt, I probably wont either. Also, check around for a good editor. Someone who shares your ideals and has a idea of where your going with it. I know from current experience that self checking is a pain.
Well Alexi didn't build it necessarily. It was he who had the idea, William was the one who created it. Alexi just popped in from time to time. Thank you anyway for the compliment. I love any and all feedback. Tell your friends!
Please let me know what you think. Any and all criticism would be excellent. Hope you all enjoyed Chapter 1
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Frikin b-e-a-utiful! I think I like this already!
I like Alexi and William. They are smart and more importantly, they seem like very dedicated workers.
Excellent, could of lived without 'Solo Dash', but it made me laugh. Also, something I got caught doing early in my fic is not enough details. but very good so far.
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Thank you for the advice I will definitely work more on detail on the chapters that follow.
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You're welcome. Maybe go check ur grammar. I didnt, I probably wont either. Also, check around for a good editor. Someone who shares your ideals and has a idea of where your going with it. I know from current experience that self checking is a pain.
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I'll make a note of that thanks
I was playing red alert 3 Today
And Now all I see is Alexi going "I have built Time Machine" like the Dr from the intro movie
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Well Alexi didn't build it necessarily. It was he who had the idea, William was the one who created it. Alexi just popped in from time to time. Thank you anyway for the compliment. I love any and all feedback. Tell your friends!