For so many of us speaking is a given. We do it every day at a whim or just because we can but what if you couldn't? Vinyl never got that choice she was born with it made for her.
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Goods.
Just be careful with the commas.
Despite the fact that you really need an editor and a few more commas in your sentences, I really loved this chapter. I can really sympathise with Vinyl, and how much she cares about making Octavia happy. Though the punishment for what she did was a bit...excessive, given the fact that Sunset got away mostly scot-free after turning into a demon and brainwashing the entire school.
7716912 In friendship games they seemed to hint that they covered that up for Sunsets sake. Vinyl beat up the Deans daughter meaning that it went right to the top of the chain of command. Even if Celestia wanted to she couldn't hide this incident from her boss therefor the choice to overlook this was never in her hands. If you beat up the daughter of your bosses boss who do you think is gonna be breathing down your neck?
7716940 Touché.
7718108 Thank good sir.
Well, how did Vinyl's parents take her expulsion? Neon? The HuMane
SixSeven? Now I really want Vinyl to kick Amethyst's ass. Give her a beating worth getting expelled over. Unfortunately, the bh will somehow get Octavia to pay the price.That explain why we always see Cheerilee pissed off all the time.
I want maor
i'm crying need next chapter
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Don't worry it shouldn't be too long till the next one is up but I don't have an exact date of release yet. I'll get to working on it as soon as I can find the inspiration though.
Each chapter from beginning to end has kept me on the very edge of my seat I am so very much looking forward to reading more of this very delightful story. I find the characters both thrilling and exciting I love how each of them interact with each other and how well placed and written the story is. It is both easy to follow and to read not boring or dull at all but rather well thought out well made and well edited a true masterpiece of art work. Can't wait to see more of this fantastic story. Keep up the really awesome and wonderful work.
7755988 You humble me with your kind words my friend, blessings to you and yours!
7756080 Blessed be to you and yours may you always walk in the grace of the lady and father. I loved your story and am eagerly awaiting more chapters and work such as that one. You are the definition of a good pony style writer your story had me on the very edge of my seat thus I am left wanting to see more of such wonderful work such as this one.