For so many of us speaking is a given. We do it every day at a whim or just because we can but what if you couldn't? Vinyl never got that choice she was born with it made for her.
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Uh...how is this relevant? I thought this story was about Vinyl and Octavia. So I'm really confused over where any of this is going.
Also, maybe you should go over this chapter one or two more times. Just about every paragraph has a spelling error of some kind in it.
Sorry if I come across as negative, since I do like this story overall, but I just don't know what to feel about this chapter.
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Vinyl and Octavia are the main characters and their getting there first date chapter next time I write but this story isn't just about them it's about young love and there are going to be multiple story lines that all connect. Amethyst is getting focus as well because she has a very important part to play down the road as she's more of an anti hero than a villan. This chapter is important but you won't know for sure why till I get further into the story.
as for the spelling my bad but I've lost contact with my editor for the time being and I'm not that good at gramer add to that the fact that I've been busy and gotten rusty and that let to some difficulties. Trust your author my friend and look forward to a mushy cute and romance filled chapter in the next installment!
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Ok I gotta know, was the hooded figure Gilda?
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Yes. I was tiered of everyone making her a villain so I made her a vigilanty instead it seemed to fit her in this setting and whenever she makes her next appearnce in either this story or her own spin off. Also please vote on my most recent blog if you will. Oh and I'm writting the chapter about Vinyl and Octavia's first date as we speak!
oh dear.... i see where this is going
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So, the title of this story has a double meaning? Another unexpected twist.
Okay, truth by told, I do like the story thus far, but for a Grammar Nazi like me, this story is a grammatical minefield. I try not to focus on the negatives, but this sentence is terrible:
Four errors all at once. It's bad, and what's worse is that it happens more and more repetitively as the fic progresses.
I actually like the storyline thus far, and because of my affinity for this fic, please let me Grammar Nazi this fic. For the love of Celestia, please let me Grammar Nazi this fic.