Hmmm.....Three good chapters in a row.... Well, I'm gonna guess that one of the next few chapters is gonna be the "meh" chapter. Everyone gets them. In fact, I've noticed that for every three or so really good chapters, there will be one "Meh" Chapter. Kinda like Megaman X1, X2, and X3. X1 and X2 were amazing, but X3 left alot to be desired simply because the first two used up all the better ideas. Still a good game, just didn't quite match up to the poularity of the other two.hmmm.....In fact....This here is a Let's Play of all three games. Take a look if you feel like doing so. I just wanted to make sure you understood that these chapter can and WILL happen. Some people like them however, others(like myself) just kinda read and don't notice anything too...out there....

GAAAH......I'm too tired to give a sensible review right now....I'm going to bed...though I would kind of appreciate a response letting me know whether or not I came off as kind of a jerk. If so, sorry.

Ditzy/Derpy's got a soft spot in my heart, she's one of my favorite characters. Good story, keep 'em coming!

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Yeah, same here. I've always enjoyed the little personality most fanfics have given her...socially awkward, easily upset, yet incredibly intelligent. Reminds me of myself quiet a bit

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You're fine, no worries! I honestly, when I wrote it (all 3 chapters, incidentally), thought it all just sucked, like I didn't think I wrote it well at all.

854461 Y'know, I think you were more right than intended...I still don't know what to do next.

3321934 I've found doing Crossover oneshot drabbles help. Like.....Well, there was one that I did years ago where Yajirobe from DBZ found himself in Pikmin. Just something REEEALLY out there to kill the blockage in my brain. I can ramble off a few suggestions, if you wish?