Well, at least Cadance is a better cook than Misato.

"Sorry about Applejack, Twilight!" Pinkie said as she bounced around her family's bakery preparing treats. "I just know she'll come around!"

Don't worry Twilight, you and Toji Applejack will be friends soon enough.

The story is okay, but would be better if you put more into it, like expand the description of what they're doing, what's going on around them, and a little more time with the plot to actually flesh it out. That would take it from good, to a great story.