The fate of the world was about to be decided, but something was different. All it took was the involvement of a demon and a decision from Chara to change it all.
7393981 In a way, the 'controller' is basically the same as a normal undertale player. That would be the normal concept anyway, in this case, it's a bit more demonic
This story is great so far, and that picture of the crystal queen is beautiful. Is there any particular reason why you set the story when Twilight was still a unicorn?
7399205 I just added it. Also for the rating, a teen rating would probably fit it better, but I'd like to keep it rated mature just to be safe, or at least until I'm finished with the story so I know whether or not it would fully fit. So no, it probably won't be too bloody, and if it does contain a lot of gore then I'll probably post a warning at the beginning of the chapter that has it.
7399252 Possibly, I'm not too sure yet. Heck, I'm not even to sure if there are going to be any excessively gory parts. I have a fight or two planned for the story, but those shouldn't be too bad beyond the usual battle wounds. The only thing that could be excessively gory is a possible dungeon flashback scene I'm thinking about. Like I said before, not too sure if it'll even be in the story, but it could contain a few important pieces of info if I decide to do it, although the most important info I'll probably mention after those scenes.
tbh i keep getting thoughts of sombra's backstory/species and physichal similarities to some of Chra's less than savory representations in the oh so popular glitchtale AU
7439359 I know right. Some parts of the story are/will be inspired from it too. I'll try to not exactly copy anything from Glitchtale, but there are definetly some noticable connections. Especially in the next chapter!
7393981 In a way, the 'controller' is basically the same as a normal undertale player. That would be the normal concept anyway, in this case, it's a bit more demonic
You do know that the latin ending -us is male?
7397101 I didn't know that. Thanks for letting me know
This story is great so far, and that picture of the crystal queen is beautiful. Is there any particular reason why you set the story when Twilight was still a unicorn?
7398480 The story is taking place just before the season 3 premiere. I should've probably stated that in the description
7399172 Ok, got it. So, are you going to add that to the description? Also, I just noticed that the story is rated M, how bloody is it going to be?
7399205 I just added it. Also for the rating, a teen rating would probably fit it better, but I'd like to keep it rated mature just to be safe, or at least until I'm finished with the story so I know whether or not it would fully fit. So no, it probably won't be too bloody, and if it does contain a lot of gore then I'll probably post a warning at the beginning of the chapter that has it.
7399234 Got it. Do you think people will be able to skip the bloody parts without missing anything important?
7399252 Possibly, I'm not too sure yet. Heck, I'm not even to sure if there are going to be any excessively gory parts. I have a fight or two planned for the story, but those shouldn't be too bad beyond the usual battle wounds. The only thing that could be excessively gory is a possible dungeon flashback scene I'm thinking about. Like I said before, not too sure if it'll even be in the story, but it could contain a few important pieces of info if I decide to do it, although the most important info I'll probably mention after those scenes.
7399295 Ok, got it.
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tbh i keep getting thoughts of sombra's backstory/species and physichal similarities to some of Chra's less than savory representations in the oh so popular glitchtale AU
7439359 I know right. Some parts of the story are/will be inspired from it too. I'll try to not exactly copy anything from Glitchtale, but there are definetly some noticable connections. Especially in the next chapter!