Meh.

Nice looved it i loved that she was enjoy8ng getting her hooves worshiped abd the ending was heartwarming.

7389687 Totally read it in 10's voice XD
But yeah, I feel like I could have done a lot better.

7390243 You see, the whole hoof licking thing put me off. That was kinda gross. Hell, I didn't even finish the story because of that.

7390350 I don't mean to sound rude, but the description had a bit of a warning of what was coming. Sorry you didn't like it.

7390425 Nah, that's fine. I actually didn't see the warning, so that's my bad.

7390477 I'll make stuff like this more apparent next time

I liked :) I enjoyed reading this story ten/ten

Haha, well it'd be hypocritical if I said I disliked this story. Especially seeing as your hooves were so moist and delectable, Amber~

7390665 Thank you!

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7391423 anytime :)