I love this story. Mainly because Rainbow Factory is my favorite dark story and for this follow up story I love it. I can't wait for the next chapter. You did a awesome job with this story.

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I get it makes the story more interesting but why didn't scootaloo just leave the moment she showed up I would try to find twilight cause if it has been years sense she died like the story said then she's been missing from ponyville for quite some time