4 Years after out last story, all the girls are growing up and starting to bloom. But bigotry from the past and a hidden past may break apart the six fillies who are now fast friends.
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I really loved this chapter, it is the best so far but I just wanted to mention the it in this sentence doesn't seem to fit.
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Diamond knew of her father's bigotry. She loves her family and doesn't feel right keeping secrets. But she wants to be with sweetie Belle and is torn between the two.
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Um it's more the sentence doesn't make sense gramatically, I know what the sentence means but it might make more sense if it was more like she said "She had to think about it because she wasn't sure how to manage any issues that may arise with her friends and family, but she made sure to tell me she wasn't saying no either"
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Thanks! Although grammar is fine for literature, I really don't know anyone who speaks with 'proper grammar' all the time. Perhaps the language is evolving or maybe we're all becoming lazy!