7451030 thanks man. English isn't my first language and i think my biggest enemy is the spelling rather than the grammar alone but i think when i am "in the mood" (if you know what i mean) thinks like grammar can easily slip by and i can't notice the mistake i make :D
Well this is a good idea for a story but... the grammar dude! But seriously,work on the grammar and you'll do just fine with this story. SICK OUT
7451030 thanks man. English isn't my first language and i think my biggest enemy is the spelling rather than the grammar alone but i think when i am "in the mood" (if you know what i mean) thinks like grammar can easily slip by and i can't notice the mistake i make :D