The Spark

by rikkuidol

Chapter 8: Scorched Earth

Writers Notes: Again this is the Unedited Version(for all you eager readers out there! =D), Edited Version will be out either late today or early tommorow.

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"Ghastly Gourge"

*RAAAAAWWWR!!*

A huge Red Dragon Towers over the wall of flame that chandra made earlier, just behind the flame chandra was getting ready for her 2nd encounter with the dragon form of sarkhan vol, but this time she does not have the aid of jace.

I am the bone of my sword...

The huge dragon slowly walking past the wall of flame but chandra only stood there with eyes closed reciting an incantation.

...Steel is my body and fire is my blood..

The Huge dragon with eye color of a ruby red, crept closer with mouth agape and small flames coming out.

...I have Burned over a thousand places...

It's Mouth opening taking up a huge load of air.

...Unknown to Death, Nor Known to Life...

With a second more the huge dragon blew a huge stream of Red fire directly at female planeswalker. Without wavering chandra still stood there, eyes closed and still chanting.

..Have withstood pain to create many arts of flame...

The Huge stream of fire engulfing the Planeswalker and melting the very spot where she was standing, her image dissapearing in the stream of flame that the dragon blew. for many seconds the fire still streamed out of the mouth of the dragon and after a few more seconds the stream of flame grew short until it ended. the only thing that was left of the spot was a huge burnt hole with bits of fire surrounded the hole.

...Yet, These Hands Will Never Hold Anything...

..So As I Pray, Devastating Summons!!

And with a Huge Tremor 2 Huge red Elemental Creatures Burst forth from the hole on the ground rising and leveling with the dragon form of sarkhan, just behind the 2 elementals sat chandra clearly exhausted her hair turning back to its silky red hair and looking up in the sky. For the most part it seems like the gourge was covered with black clouds clearly the doing of rainbow dash due to the ongoing trails of rainbow going back and forth aligning every thunder cloud to cover the exact location of the 2 elementals and sarkhan.

"Good work rainbow dash..it is time" whispered chandra to herself

"Good job rainbow dash! get over here." she screamed at the sky, and without a second further rainbow dash was infront of her.

"*huff* *huff* you...ok there..chandra?" said rainbow dash clearly exhausted

"im...fine... we need to wrap this up RD, can you still do your sonic rainboom?" asked chandra

"yeah...why?"

"great, this is what we do..."

while the 2 where conversing their plan and the 3 creatures where battling wildy, clearly a 2 vs 1, but it clearly is just an even match.

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Ghastly Gourge

Atop the gourge stood a blue cloaked man looking down at the battlefield just beside him lay an unconscious garruk.

"*sigh* foolish woman, getting introuble again..."

after that being said, a rainbow trail came out of the gourge and headed upwards heading higher than the gathered thunder clouds.

"now what are they intending to do?"

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To Be Continued

Comments

[Brony Tom]

Hm... I should probably read this.

41096

Yeah, I don't know why anyone hasn't done anything with the Eldrazi. Now THAT would be a fun story, maybe even Discord could be one of them. I'd love to write that, but alas I'm already engaged elsewhere. Anyone?

[rikkuidol]

59329

lol, the eldrazi's and the phyrexian's will have a part in the story in the later chapters, =D

[Mänic]

this is really good, I would never have thought to mix Magic: The Gathering with ponies myself but it works splendidly

[Cirrus]

59375
I was sarcastic earlier, but I totally am writing a New Phyquestira fic now, lol.

I bet you a million bits yours ends happier than mine does, though! I'll give you a hint: remember how well the Scars of Mirrodin block went for the natives of Mirrodin? Yeah, about that happy.

[rikkuidol]

59409

lol

[Brony Tom]

59409

I've actually got a "New Equestria" set that I made/am working on. I can try and find a way to post the cards, if you're interested.

[Jeff Belinger]

Even jace is going to go "my mind is full of rainbows" after this!

[Jeff Belinger]

Even jace is going to go "my mind is full of rainbows" after this!59375

Let the "compleation" begin. Stare into the eyes of perfect phyrexian unlife! I hope Elesh norn, grand cenobite comes in first! Then the rest

[Cirrus]

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Normally I'd say yes, but I'm designing some cards to be put at the end of each chapter, and I don't want to see anypony else's ideas and subconsciously steal them.
Also, me and three of my buddies are working on a 3 set pony block right now, and I also don't want to unknowingly steal for that either.

I'm sure they're damn great cards, though. No doubt.

[Brony Tom]

60485

Thanks, I understand and appreciate that. I at least want to see your cards.

[rikkuidol]

60485

i second that! me want to see too!

[Cirrus]

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62484

Gah! Now there's too much pressure to make them awesome, or at least to convince myself they are!
Lol; hopefully I'll have the first/prologue chapter up in a week or so; I made cards to post at the end of each chapter to kind of help set the mood and tell the story. Warning, though; little to no art on them; I'm not a good artist, and the mechanics and flavor text are more important to me to tell the story/flavor.
I'll give you a preview/hint on the design of some of them: how would beings like the Praetors form and evolve on a plane that slim to none black mana? They'd still be powerful, all right, but they'd need to pull on at least two colors to have any comparable power enough to spread the glorious word of Yawgmoth.

Damn, I really need to get finished on that prologue...

[rikkuidol]

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lol me too, im bad at drawing stuff, the stuff my mind produces, as much as i want to draw jace and pinkiepie together , BRAIN Y U NO DRAW GOOD?