I used to be one of the best mercenaries around until I landed myself in prison. A few months later and now I'm stuck in some place called Equestria and to be honest, I don't think I belong here.
So they're sending a mercenary who is not only a smartass but a badass one at that into one of the most peaceful universes (Unless you count Rainbow Dash, Luna, Celestia, and the rest of the Everfree]s wildlife.), just to find out what is in this world. Yeah i think we are going to have a bad time.
With that being said, if you don't have anything nice to say about it then move on, I'm not going to entertain any hateful comments, they will simply be deleted.
Damn, and here you had a story that looks, seems, and smells great and then you put something like this in the end of the first chapter. Is there a reason for it from somewhere?
Sounds like a good story, but how is damn profanity?
It will get worse as the story goes on.
7200157 YAY CURSING!
They don't have a chance.
So they're sending a mercenary who is not only a smartass but a badass one at that into one of the most peaceful universes (Unless you count Rainbow Dash, Luna, Celestia, and the rest of the Everfree]s wildlife.), just to find out what is in this world. Yeah i think we are going to have a bad time.
Damn, and here you had a story that looks, seems, and smells great and then you put something like this in the end of the first chapter. Is there a reason for it from somewhere?