Greatness is achieved through sweat, blood, tears, and pain. How did I do it? Sacrificing. Sacrificing what? Everything. My life, my soul, my essence, who I am as a person, as an individual. Oh, and the elements of harmony, those need to go too.
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Honestly I bring this up almost every chapter, but at this point its a plot hole that makes the character's interactions (for this chapter) seem... out of character. Otherwise it's great, but it literally makes zero sense for them to go from criminals being investigated & under guard to welcome guests with no observable transition. The reason WHY this sticks is because it is what Celestia & Luna's first established positions in the story are, as antagonistic figures.
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(Sorry for the long response, I just prefer responding to people like this)
From a literal standpoint, Austin and Daniel were never criminals. "Under investigation," yes. They possessed the elements and the princesses wanted them back. They needed to be strict with the freedom that they were given to assure that they could understand what they needed to do. Once they found out that getting them back was borderline impossible, there was no reason to be as strict with them. They started realizing how many scenarios could be positive for them and Equestria, and once they did, it only made sense to let the boys be. I know that this wasn't covered, but that's a GENERAL overview as to what happened during those six months. I still plan to go over this in a future chapter, like I said.
Thank you for the active criticism!
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That... actually makes it muxh clearer, actually. Would probably have been better to been conveyed earlier in the story though.
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I completely agree.