A really fascinating take on the otherwise happy and carefree clop. I like the way you expand on the character of Boomie's father, along with the little touches that expand on the larger world. However, the way this ends and a couple of the suggestions made leaves me wary of where the story is going.
A really fascinating take on the otherwise happy and carefree clop. I like the way you expand on the character of Boomie's father, along with the little touches that expand on the larger world. However, the way this ends and a couple of the suggestions made leaves me wary of where the story is going.