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So, did Thorax's sac happen to be blue as well?
It's an interesting end, although I'm not entirely sure how it worked. I look forward to eleven months when the first changeling/pony hybrids are born.
7671970 Well, the ending was SUPPOSED to be that, after a longer sex scene than what I had time to put in, Chrysalis escapes (full of Thorax's "love" which, presumably, means she could be pregnant) and leaves both him and Starlight alone with her entire horde of Changelings. There were supposed to be parts scattered throughout this longer sex scene where it would switch over to Starlight "accepting the love" from some of the generic Changeling drones around her, most likely the two armored ones that had been holding her back first (because rather than just all of them pouring their hearts out like they did in the show, they need a little extra "coaxing" to transform).
So, after Chrysalis escapes, Starlight looks at the dozens upon dozens (maybe even hundreds!) of drones that have yet to transform and comes up with the idea to free Celestia, Luna, the Mane Six, and the others from their cocoons and have them help her "coax" the love out of the remaining, non-transformed Changelings (aka, one big orgy where the Changelings "give their love" to the ponies). Of course, this was WAY too ambitious for the time that I had, which is why we got the rushed, watered-down version of it instead Don't know if that cleared things up any (or if I missed your point entirely), but, that was my vision for the ending going into it.
7672499 I got that. What I'm not clear on is how the love transfer kept... failing? Backfiring? Several times, Chrysalis would be absorbing love from Thorax, then she would start to feel like she had been getting drained herself instead. It was interesting, but I'm not sure how it happened.
7672955 Oh, that. Yeah, I just needed a reason for her to want to leave, so... I guess the exhaustion from such a prolonged "love sharing" session with Thorax outweighed the benefits of getting said love. Probably should have had a couple paragraphs talking about how she climaxed several times and was at the brink of collapsing underneath Thorax in sexually-induced fatigue right before she blasted him off and ran. Ah well, hindsight is 20-20, I guess!