All hail Princess Jewel!
Jewel slowly opened her eyes. Her vision was hazy, as if she had not opened her eyes in a long time. "Where am I?" She mumbled to herself as she got to her hooves. She looked at her surroundings, "The Apple orchards?" It was then that she noticed a golden coated unicorn laying on the ground nearby. "Orchid!" She said, rushing over to her. As Orchid started to stir, Jewel noticed a strange necklace hanging around Orchid's neck. It appeared to be made of gold with a gem carved in the shape of a butterfly. Glancing down Jewel noticed a similar necklace around her neck, only hers had a six pointed star. "Something very strange is happening, and I intend to find out what." Jewel said as she turned toward the library.
Sorry that this is a short chapter!
I know that the element of magic is a tiara but it would clash with Jewel's gem so I made it a crown. Also yes Trixie pulled the elements back out of the tree of harmony. That's how powerful a wish on Luna's moon is. Plus if anyone is interested I might create a short story of Jewel's fake back story. Just let me know.
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can we all see their change first before they wake up?
S/He right you know
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7051265 Thank you for your feedback! I must admit, this is my first Fanfiction and grammar and spelling were never my strong suite. If you would be willing to help me that would be great! Simply email what needs to be changed and what you think should be added and I will try to change it. I sadly have not had much time to devote to this fanfiction even though I came up with the original idea for this story almost a year ago. The "Ballad" of Allusia is just a fancy name for the poem I jotted down after coming up with the idea. I did write another stanza but after editing the plotline it became completely unrelated with the story. If you know if there's some way I can show you the chapters before they're published, I'd love to make you my editor.
Please let me know what you think of this proposition.
When is a next chapter going to be?
7098249 I have been very busy and haven't been able to start working on the next chapter yet
but I'll try to get started.
Sorry I haven't been on. My device broke.