Orbis is the name of the planet Equestria is on, right? (no, I haven't read the story, but I will)

7008832 Correct.

Greeting MartianMan98, I would like to voice (or write in this situation) my opinions on this Story. The story itself is confusing, however I believe that you're planning on explaining it in the future. So, anyways, that being said I still want to tell you that the story is still awesome and it needs more views, if you want that I believe you can mention your story in groups and some more people might read your story. Continue your story and don't sweat fans love you

7054261 Yes, yes, this is an ABSURDLY late response to your outstanding input (life got in the way for a few weeks), but I'm not one to simply leave a constructive comment unresponded to. So allow me to thank you for making your thoughts known to me. Indeed, this story, should I opt to continue it, will make greater sense further down the road. Anyway, my apologies for the delay in reply.