...okay. I do have some issues with the set up and ideas of the story. Since it is for a clop plot, I'll skip over it.

However, there is an inconsistency in this chapter that needs to be remedied.
When Gilda is alone at the beginning:

She had taken a beating that would have killed most, and her nightmares were still haunted by shine of steel, and the jersey’s of the other team as their members fell upon her.

Which basically states that whatever happened to her, was done by another team. Not much else is known at this point.
But when Nurse Redheart is talking to Gilda:

“You fell under your teammate’s ice skates after slamming an opponent into a wall, correct?”
“And they piled on top of you, breaking your bones and causing you to be in so much constant agony..."

This gives the impression that it was Gilda's own team that ended up attacking her. Which, while it that would be an interesting -- if wasted -- plot twist, is somewhat contradictory of the previous statement.