Hmm interesting concept. I would like to know more about the other alicorns and Aldric's relationship with Luna and Celestia. The plot int his first chapter is a little lacking, but you can tighten it up in future installments. But it is pretty good, it certainly got my attention! Favorited and i will be following this!
I'm not too sure but I did enjoy the first chapter. Liked and Fav'd. Lets see where this goes
EDIT: Was Awesome! Can't wait for more!
Hmm interesting concept. I would like to know more about the other alicorns and Aldric's relationship with Luna and Celestia. The plot int his first chapter is a little lacking, but you can tighten it up in future installments. But it is pretty good, it certainly got my attention! Favorited and i will be following this!