Ignorance is a difficult thing to maintain whether by a civilization about its world or by a pony about her friends. Eventually awareness will dawn.
One problem that you keep having is that the story is too confusing. Just what is happening and how did Twilight end up there?You should start at home or give it in a flashback.
One problem that you keep having is that the story is too confusing. Just what is happening and how did Twilight end up there?
You should start at home or give it in a flashback.