Of course it’s up there, her internal voice echoed in a biting way, You would have frozen to death by now if it wasn’t.
A hint to help you: when utilizing a character's inner monolog a better and easier to understand format for the thoughts would look like this: 'Of course it’s up there,' her internal voice echoed in a biting way, 'You would have frozen to death by now if it wasn’t.'
Awww... Now I'm sad... I literally just watched the movie a few hours ago and I'll admit I cried like a baby
A hint to help you: when utilizing a character's inner monolog a better and easier to understand format for the thoughts would look like this:
'Of course it’s up there,' her internal voice echoed in a biting way, 'You would have frozen to death by now if it wasn’t.'
Finished the chapter. Very bleak and good descriptions. The scene on the farm with the barnyard nearly made ill.
I will be tracking this one.
You have done a wonderful job showing the environment and the poor grey mare in it.
Two hooves up for you!