Ok, there's a few lines at the end that made me reread them several times to make sure I read them right.

Tavi looked at me and then at her parents. I guess she finally started to feel that they were approving of me. I took a deep breath before looking at her parents, "Mom, dad, I have something I wanted to tell you."

Maybe because I haven't had enough dates in my life or for some other reason, is Vinyl calling Tavi's parents 'Mom' and 'Dad,' or did we suddenly flip first person to Octi instead?

6341744 I didn't even notice that until you pointed it out.