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~ oh discords gonna be pissed cause all the books are gone ....
I liked alot all the references
Keeep up the good work
Not a bad story and quite entertaining. It is kind of obvious that English isn't your native language, but it's not as bad as others I've seen. I am actually able to read and interpret fairly well what you mean with very few issues.
I will be looking forward to more of this!
A couple of grammar errors that were worse and repeated.
'pacifically' -should be- 'peacefully'
'pay attention' -should be- 'be careful'
poor poor kakashi T^T
well then.....I need bleach boys because this is some cringe worthy stuff....imma still read it tho
So I've been reading for a while and I've noticed some words or phrases consistently used that seemed out of place but I guessed the intent. Yet again, I get it that english ain't your best.
Pay attention= Stay safe
Pacifically= Peacefully
Pretend= force(d)
There are so many more...
This story sums up why I hate Rainbow Cunt so much.
I think Naruto might disagree.