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its good to see your starting this on fimfiction and fanfiction
Sweet
Does the story on FF.net have more chapters? If it does what is the name of it, because I couldn't find it.
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It has The same title "The prince of storms" always by Sweetmiss2121 :)
I am waiting to post here so to Respect The rules of this forum, sorry :)
You might want to hire an editor...![:eeyup:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/eeyup.png)
Argh....Uhm...The start doesn't quite draw me in...Still withholding my judgement.
Naruto is too OP!!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
and i like it!
R.I.P Nightmare Moon![:ajsleepy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsleepy.png)
7622724 just be glad he doesnt have discords powers too for add discords powers with naruto's current level of power would be the new level of OP
Okay, so at least you gave a notice that English isn't your main language, so it's understandable why the sentence structure is jarring at best, stumbling at worst. Recommend that you seek out an editor for what's out and some proofreaders for future releases. Try recruiting from your fanbase or some of those writer groups.