love it

6131165 Thanks. Now let's see if everyone else does too. And I can't thank you enough for letting me use your idea.

6131177 no problem but i have to ask i the story will u put a chapter about his first words and how twilight reacts when he calls him mama im just wondering

it's great so far, but just a word of advice, some people will have trouble reading the yellow and sometimes the light blue. but all in all I really look forward to seeing this progress.

6131264 Okay thanks. I can see how that would hurt some eyes. The second chapter should be up either today or tomorrow. I really appreciate your comment.

6131283 i must say you have potential. once you start opening up and getting more used to it things should come by a bit easier. just remember to pace yourself and don't try to finish the whole story in a day, you'll just end up overworking yourself and that tends to rush the story. now I'm not going to say that i know everything about writing, cause i can't write worth crap. but i can tell you that there are still people that will help you if you need it. and if you ever get terrible comments, don't take them badly, ok? use them to improve, that is if they make valid points and aren't total idiots. but i have high hopes for you, like i said you have great potential.
(p.s. sorry for text wall.)

6131334 Thanks. And for what I have planned, there would be no way that I could finish this in even a month! And I take all criticism as someone's attempt to make me better than what I was. You are a cool bro.

6131345 thanks, looking forward to this story and what you have planned for it.

This is an awesome story.

6131604 Thanks! I really appreciate you taking the time to read this and comment.

6131614 You're welcome.

prince of persia

6131651 Props for recognizing the character in the pic. I was looking for a good cover art picture and whenever I hear the word prince I automatically think of Prince of Persia for the PS2. It was the very first game that I fell in love with as a kid because of the story and gameplay. It was an amazing series, but the new games were no where near the original three in my opinion.

6131684 is this a prince of Persia crossover because if it is i will be so happy :D

6132889 Sadly, no. But I was planning on doing one a bit later...

6132889 Sadly, no. But I was planning on doing one a bit later...

isolated discovery will distantly become the choice that affects the fate of many races, and countless lives.

could it be, that he is actually a Human prince, that is able to do important things? Maye defeat some strong foes? Then i think i give it a try.

6133689 Maybe he is, maybe he can, and maybe he will. Only way to know is to stick with the story...

Maybe a bit shorter than other chapters, but i like it.
Not sure which i would like more, if your Ponys can be older than normal, which happens suddenly in some of the newest fanfictions, but then again the Human would maybe have to die earlier than their parents, but maybe the Magic, different world, food and other things, could lead to him having a longer life too.

If you should make them age normal, then i still hope they are young enough to still have adventures if you make him to grow up soon.
I actually hope for a long story, or for more storys about him, one as a kid, one as teenager maybe, and if it doesn´t already happens, a story where he get´s a Marefriend, Bugfriend whatever, and maybe even has kids. Trilogy? Yeah i ask for to much again, but i could not stop.

Is there a chance, that he get´s a Changeling as a friend?, don´t need to happen, i just like them very much.
Well i ask about his personality, and other things, if he is actually old enough to speak about it.
While i hope he isn´t to nice, and that he has some backbone, that doesn´t mean that i would like him to be an asshole, but since he seems to be something important, maybe he isn´t the typical wimp.
Sorry no idea how to describe it different, i try again tomorrow morning if i actually sleept, or if you respond. (i really need to sleep, i think i just needed more than enough time for this one comment right now.)

6133495 D:

6134044 Well I plan on making this story quite lengthy. I have a host of ideas that I want to implement in this world. As for the age of the characters, I plan on fast-forwarding pretty soon to his sixteenth birthday. At that time the main six would be about late twenties or early thirties. As for the boy's personality, I plan on having him extremely intelligent and well educated. He will also be a brilliant tactician, a bit like Light from deathnote. He will be very well at home in politics and government affairs. But don't be deterred, there will be plenty of action for the things that are going to happen... Thanks for reading.

6134317 His description made me remember "Hubert", from Tales of Grace f a bit, but i know Light too.