Our Paper/ Epiloge
Many papers were handed in on the first day of Seventh Grade. Cherrilee read through many.
My Summer by Twist
My summer was great! I made many candies.
A+. Last paper! Cheerilee began to read.
Our Summer by Apple Bloom, Button Mash, Diamond Tiara, Rumble, Scootaloo, Silver Spoon, and Sweetie Belle
Our summer was........ Special. I nearly drowned and Silver made me kiss Button. Not that I hate him. I nearly died. Also, Sweetie Belle turned into a pony-human and stuck Rumble and Scootaloo together with Superglue! That was funny! My summer was awesome! I kissed Rumble! I like him, and he likes me back! Eeeeeee! Mah summer was great! Ah saw romance buddin! I hated my Summer! Scoots and I had to spend three days in the hospital. I nearly went to jail. I loved my summer! Although I needed Mind Bleach.
A++! Cheerilee beamed with pride. She frowned when she realized what went on. She shrugged it off.
The first person who wrote was Sweetie Belle, the second was Button Mash, the third was Scootaloo, the fourth was Apple Bloom, the fifth was Rumble, the sixth was Silver Spoon, and the seventh was Diamond Tiara.
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Why are these chapters so short? I mean, these characters are relatively indistinguishable, unless you count their flanderizations. I guess these guys are in the human world.
What does that even mean?
Where did he come from?
Why? Doesn't she hang out with them in this story?
The sentences are short and choppy. I could see this concept working, and ultimately, no offense intended, you should really take a break before going onto a new story. Your two stories were panned, and unless you want to write trollfics, take your audience's advice.
LOL about the letter they wrote! It cracked me up!
6014909 Parole officer. They had to just that summer. They could be mean, but they decided to be nice. This sucks Sporting Goods. Dick's Sporting Goods?