Sketchy Salad Serenata

by Sketchy Sounds

Sesta Aria

An aged song is played anew,
A younger song is played by two.

From a far-off land comes a well-known tune,
with words that speak life and bring meaning new.

And so friends, come, and gather round
Enjoy our festival of sound.

Comments

[Borg]

with words that speak life and bring meaning new.

I feel like you could have gotten the meter better on this line. Not that I've been paying attention to whether you use any sort of consistent meter (probably not), but that line just doesn't feel right.