I blame the fact that this is being written from his memory and a lot of the stuff that was at the beginning, is kind of lost.
Hello, co-writer, idea guy, and the man who said "Hey, lets do an alt-verse of FOE where Little Pip never left with Samus, that should last me only about a few months" (he said, one year after doing this,) I wnat to talk a little about these first two chapters.
Tecna, the girl who sends Samus here, had a bigger role orginally. I had plans for her to be misson control for Samus, but those fell through. Also, the bits about overpopulation and the worsening of the Rangers was all him, it wasn't in the original.
You have my attention good sir I'm intrigued.
I shall wait in anticipation for the next chapter of this story.
The concept is good but the writings a little off.
It feels a bit rushed in pacing but I like the idea
6100717
How so?
6101170
I know it feels rushed, but I assure you, we're not even a third finished. I'm hoping for a story within the 40-50 chapter range.
6101170
I blame the fact that this is being written from his memory and a lot of the stuff that was at the beginning, is kind of lost.
Hello, co-writer, idea guy, and the man who said "Hey, lets do an alt-verse of FOE where Little Pip never left with Samus, that should last me only about a few months" (he said, one year after doing this,) I wnat to talk a little about these first two chapters.
Tecna, the girl who sends Samus here, had a bigger role orginally. I had plans for her to be misson control for Samus, but those fell through. Also, the bits about overpopulation and the worsening of the Rangers was all him, it wasn't in the original.
6101480
sorry
6103070
For what?
6103735 if my comment seemed mean that's all
6103875
it wasn't mean at all.
6103889 ok