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I tried to make Nico look like a good guy
Also, i don't want the story to be as long as PH. I stopped reading after so many chapters. It was good, but i felt it was just being dragged on for nothing. Once i finish, i'll try to rewrite it.
Thanks again for reading!
I'm not really sure about the Princess Luna thing. Even if you didn't intend to do it, the whole things seems like an "insert best pony here because (s)he is awesome and has to be in the story" kind of thing. All in all it seems pretty forced.
And I have to say that for a mare with anxiety issues she starts to trust everyone pretty quickly. That seems a bit out of character for her. But I guess you can blame the hormones, which I'm not a great fan of, but that's just a personal preference in character-writing.