A gift-fic for Princess Molestia. Molly is just a humble sexy princess. She raises the sun and lowers it as per her duty. What does she do in between those times though? Follow Molly through her life escapades and find out what makes Molly Molly.
5758241 I know who is Molly. But man... this story is bad! Its not even a story! You can do much better! Im gonna read your next stoy and i hope its good. Not like this ...
5760358 It's suppose to be comedic shorts. I'll take it into consideration about revoking this series and try to make a story with Molly. Fact is Molly is very random and strange as times. Very unpredictable. I haven't been able to make a good plot with her idea.
After reading this story, I do have recommend that you try to have a proofreader or two to help out with any errors in grammar, punctuation, and so forth. There are certain sentences that are missing a letter, commas, and even periods. Even the first paragraph might require a bit of fixing up. Other than that, I do see the potential of this story.
5773233 might revoke this story due to negative feedback. Truth be told I love Molly. Yet people are expecting something from Molly stories and from me. So honesty I'm not hitting the mark with my readers and efforts to this story are pretty much diminished at this point. Proofreading is the least of my worries with this series. I also have others series to worry about besides this one where it deserves my attention.
5758241
I know who is Molly. But man... this story is bad! Its not even a story! You can do much better!
Im gonna read your next stoy and i hope its good. Not like this ...
5760358 It's suppose to be comedic shorts. I'll take it into consideration about revoking this series and try to make a story with Molly. Fact is Molly is very random and strange as times. Very unpredictable. I haven't been able to make a good plot with her idea.
5760397
Well. Its not funny(
After reading this story, I do have recommend that you try to have a proofreader or two to help out with any errors in grammar, punctuation, and so forth. There are certain sentences that are missing a letter, commas, and even periods. Even the first paragraph might require a bit of fixing up. Other than that, I do see the potential of this story.
5773233 might revoke this story due to negative feedback. Truth be told I love Molly. Yet people are expecting something from Molly stories and from me. So honesty I'm not hitting the mark with my readers and efforts to this story are pretty much diminished at this point. Proofreading is the least of my worries with this series. I also have others series to worry about besides this one where it deserves my attention.
5775121 It's a shame that you're revoking this story but regardless, I do wish the best of luck in your future writing projects and them.
5775148 "Might" Keyword.
5775617 Alrighty then.