Hmm, first one night stand clopfic i've ever read
But it did not disappoint. Great job.

571824 Thank you, it was the first one I have written so I was hoping I didn't do too bad. Though I did overuse some words a bit...ah well. c:

Lol, OC shipping is totally not an un-clever way to mask a self insert.

I gave a "Long description" as the site said I should, but did look over it and narrow it down so it's a little more broad and open, while still giving a short insight on what does happen. Only name given is Rarity.

You have a...lot of improper capitalizations. Stick to capitalizing titles, people, places, and God when you're not staring a sentence. As a former English major, it comes off as extremely jarring to try and read this.