5750166 I appreciate your feedback. Now I ask for you to understand a few things.
Seeing as how no one told Applejack and Rainbow Dash that Twilight was in the human world in the previous story, they closed the portal. Rarity, Pinkie, and Flutters upon seeing said closed portal must have thought Twilight returned home.
Rainbow Dash would then go into the portal alone because out of the rest of the Main 5, her other duties as a weather mare could be covered by other pegasi. Everyone else had other responsibilities that couldn't be handled by another pony. Coupled with the fact that they were facing an unknown world, they all might have been afraid, other than Applejack and Rainbow Dash.
And upon entering said unknown world, Rainbow sees people with glowing eyes and rings. Seeing as how she knew absolutely nothing about what the other people in this world looked like, she just thought that was normal. Plus as said in the first chapter, the students were acting as they normally do. Unlike in the previous story where Twilight saw all of them just staring at the stage until they were ordered by Adagio to bring her to them.
5750166
I appreciate your feedback. Now I ask for you to understand a few things.
Seeing as how no one told Applejack and Rainbow Dash that Twilight was in the human world in the previous story, they closed the portal. Rarity, Pinkie, and Flutters upon seeing said closed portal must have thought Twilight returned home.
Rainbow Dash would then go into the portal alone because out of the rest of the Main 5, her other duties as a weather mare could be covered by other pegasi. Everyone else had other responsibilities that couldn't be handled by another pony. Coupled with the fact that they were facing an unknown world, they all might have been afraid, other than Applejack and Rainbow Dash.
And upon entering said unknown world, Rainbow sees people with glowing eyes and rings. Seeing as how she knew absolutely nothing about what the other people in this world looked like, she just thought that was normal. Plus as said in the first chapter, the students were acting as they normally do. Unlike in the previous story where Twilight saw all of them just staring at the stage until they were ordered by Adagio to bring her to them.
Very cliche. And predictable. Care to add some plot twists?