I want to like individual chapters over and over again! This contrast against Able's more normal expression, and sight into his ideal self and modes of action, really serves to flesh out Able as a character and expose some of the internal conflicts he must have. Well done!
This was a really beautiful chapter and I am having a hard time expressing why. I just love the way you wrote Able, everything is just... perfect. (Even better with the choice of music!)
Wow, a much more advanced form of split personality, or a alcohol induced version of Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde if you will, in any case i like it.
Wow. Way to exceed my expectations there Hat.
*golf clap*
This is Able when he is not being a jerk and It's incredible the way he's able to express his repressed feelings for Tia.
I want to like individual chapters over and over again! This contrast against Able's more normal expression, and sight into his ideal self and modes of action, really serves to flesh out Able as a character and expose some of the internal conflicts he must have. Well done!
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Can I like, email you a hug?
This was a really beautiful chapter and I am having a hard time expressing why. I just love the way you wrote Able, everything is just... perfect.
(Even better with the choice of music!)
Magic pony booze did this!
Interesting
I may have to track down the rest of your stories and take time to read them in order to properly understand what just happened