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Bitch please, I wake up at 3AM. (and don't fall back asleep)
Long tome no see. I'll be on this site on a more regular basis later but for now, some corrections.
Didst thou hadst to be that way towards Applejack?
Thou dost not hast to do that.
It is hast not has't and it is hadst in case of past tense. Here is a decent guide. http://arelith.com/node/12308
Thankfully you only give Luna a few Shakespearean lines since too many of those become hard to read. Sadly I do not have the time to do any other corrections. Great job on the story so far, keep up the good work.
6731583 Thank you! I'll put the guid to good use.
6731508 that kind sucks.
Do you want me to be a nitpicky motherfucker, pointing out everything that I find wrong with this?
6732960 Well, I gotta be a better writer, so go for it.
6733008 I definitely won't get everything, though
6733429 Alright
6733986 plus its almost christmas and i have school and whatnot with a crapton of projects because of the former. >:C I'll try
6734899 Ok.
.. GOD DAMMIT ALMOST EVERY COMEDY STORY THERE IS A I HATE MORNINGS!