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Really the only thing I have to say is,you should get a proofreader/editer .
You also really shouldn't make the character curse worse than a sailor,and curse every other sentence.
Besides that,you have a good story plot,but again,it needs better grammar as well as less swearing.With how much the main character/OC swears,it's just straight up obnoxious.
7316167 Honestly, I have seen more swearing from a character.
Keep up the good work author!