In short, it wasn't nearly as interesting as the previous part, I have to say...
Longer version : A ''chapter about reading someone's story in a journal'' isn't nearly as interesting as reading about things happening/that happened to the subject of the story. If this part had been shorter, and displayed more as an ''intermission'' rather than a continuation of the main story, then it might have been more justified. Indirect side-story VS main story.
5677228 I actually thought chapter two was the better chapter. Maybe it's just me, but the idea of Sweetie Belle USING Rarity's words to clop is very exciting. It's slipping very close to pony incest. I really loved writing of Rarity's Glory-hole adventure! Have no fears though. Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle will get something straight between them in chapter three!
I really should get back to this. Right now I'm working on a pony story not canon to this universe. It's actually part five of my "Dickgirls of Faeruhn" series. (Up to now, completely pony free!) Google that title, with the quotes, if you're curious. It takes place not long after Rainbow Rocks, and sees Twilight find a different Starswirl mirror. She won't exactly like the world it takes her to! When I'm finished, unless my muse commands otherwise, I might get back to our favorite blank flanks!
PS
"Dickgirls of Faeruhn" was not created by me. The author, Lightswitch, kindly gave me permission a couple years ago to write in the universe. It has been a pleasure to add to the wonderful stories he wrote.
6507978 Birth control is a natural thing to arise in any society. They've had it for centuries, if not longer(but for a long time it was considered more impractical than morally reprehensible, unless you were a prostitute or rich) so why not?
Getting pregnant once a year, sure, but it's a time of heightened arousal. If there's any time a pony would be wanting to get jiggy with it, it would be during heat-season. Which is kind of the point of most estrus related fics.
That, and impregnation fetishes.
"Love and tolerate." Really? You know that's not actually one of the themes, right? It's all about friendship and what's required to keep friendship healthy, but I digress.
As for tech level, they have helicopters, trains, hydroelectric dams, skyscrapers, and so many other things that were invented after condoms and chemical contraception. On top of that, MAGIC! A contraception spell would make perfect sense in Equestria, especially if estrus is used as part of the background.
Really the only thing stopping birth control is...the author. The author can set up any stumbling block they want in the name of getting ponies preggers. In the case of this fic's originator, it was only ever brought up once, and then was used as some...weird...balloon fetish. Yeah, the Rarity chapter was freaky.
I loved having Pinkie Pie as the inventor of the condom. It somehow seems to fit her character. It is true though, the lack of birth control in my version of Equestria is simply so I can have all the mares get pregnant even if they don't quite want to. I love writing about futanari impregnation!
How does that work? Is it actually a side story, or are you skipping ahead to sometime after the still-planned ending? And how does Of Mares and Donuts fit in?
6740485 Perhaps "Side Story" is the better term. As soon as I figure out how, I plan on changing that. The edit function doesn't seem to lead me to that section of the home page though.
"Of Mares and Donuts" is a side story of chapter 12 of my mane story (see what I did there?) "My Little Pony: It's Good to be The Princess". I liked the idea of Joe and Gold Digger "getting off" on watching Twilight and Derpy.
"Magical Mathematical Symptomatical" is a stand alone though, and has no links to any of my other works.
Oh, and by the way, I have been writing furiously for a couple of days. Sweetie Belle is in serious danger of a big belly, since she's positive that Scootaloo can control herself after her time with Applebloom. Will Applebloom's devious distractions make Scootaloo lose that control? Will a horny Sweetie Belle even care until it's too late?
Yes, the dormant story is getting an update...SOON!
Rarity is going to an orgy isn't she?
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Pretty much. Pregnant unwed mare at an orgy!
In short, it wasn't nearly as interesting as the previous part, I have to say...
Longer version :
A ''chapter about reading someone's story in a journal'' isn't nearly as interesting as reading about things happening/that happened to the subject of the story. If this part had been shorter, and displayed more as an ''intermission'' rather than a continuation of the main story, then it might have been more justified. Indirect side-story VS main story.
5677228
I actually thought chapter two was the better chapter. Maybe it's just me, but the idea of Sweetie Belle USING Rarity's words to clop is very exciting. It's slipping very close to pony incest. I really loved writing of Rarity's Glory-hole adventure! Have no fears though. Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle will get something straight between them in chapter three!
i loved this chaper it was a awesome read .I can't wait to see what happens next to and between them all next.I hope Babs comes to viset and joins in.
Please continue this and your other story.
5660444 when is this going to be updated again?
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I really should get back to this. Right now I'm working on a pony story not canon to this universe. It's actually part five of my "Dickgirls of Faeruhn" series. (Up to now, completely pony free!) Google that title, with the quotes, if you're curious. It takes place not long after Rainbow Rocks, and sees Twilight find a different Starswirl mirror. She won't exactly like the world it takes her to! When I'm finished, unless my muse commands otherwise, I might get back to our favorite blank flanks!
PS
"Dickgirls of Faeruhn" was not created by me. The author, Lightswitch, kindly gave me permission a couple years ago to write in the universe. It has been a pleasure to add to the wonderful stories he wrote.
6507978
Birth control is a natural thing to arise in any society. They've had it for centuries, if not longer(but for a long time it was considered more impractical than morally reprehensible, unless you were a prostitute or rich) so why not?
Getting pregnant once a year, sure, but it's a time of heightened arousal. If there's any time a pony would be wanting to get jiggy with it, it would be during heat-season. Which is kind of the point of most estrus related fics.
That, and impregnation fetishes.
"Love and tolerate." Really? You know that's not actually one of the themes, right? It's all about friendship and what's required to keep friendship healthy, but I digress.
As for tech level, they have helicopters, trains, hydroelectric dams, skyscrapers, and so many other things that were invented after condoms and chemical contraception. On top of that, MAGIC! A contraception spell would make perfect sense in Equestria, especially if estrus is used as part of the background.
Really the only thing stopping birth control is...the author. The author can set up any stumbling block they want in the name of getting ponies preggers. In the case of this fic's originator, it was only ever brought up once, and then was used as some...weird...balloon fetish. Yeah, the Rarity chapter was freaky.
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I loved having Pinkie Pie as the inventor of the condom. It somehow seems to fit her character. It is true though, the lack of birth control in my version of Equestria is simply so I can have all the mares get pregnant even if they don't quite want to. I love writing about futanari impregnation!
>Sequel to a still-incomplete story
How does that work? Is it actually a side story, or are you skipping ahead to sometime after the still-planned ending? And how does Of Mares and Donuts fit in?
6740485
Perhaps "Side Story" is the better term. As soon as I figure out how, I plan on changing that. The edit function doesn't seem to lead me to that section of the home page though.
"Of Mares and Donuts" is a side story of chapter 12 of my mane story (see what I did there?) "My Little Pony: It's Good to be The Princess". I liked the idea of Joe and Gold Digger "getting off" on watching Twilight and Derpy.
"Magical Mathematical Symptomatical" is a stand alone though, and has no links to any of my other works.
It looks like calling it a sequel is a site function when you link stories together. It is a side story though.
Oh, and by the way, I have been writing furiously for a couple of days. Sweetie Belle is in serious danger of a big belly, since she's positive that Scootaloo can control herself after her time with Applebloom. Will Applebloom's devious distractions make Scootaloo lose that control? Will a horny Sweetie Belle even care until it's too late?
Yes, the dormant story is getting an update...SOON!
EDIT TIME!
Chapter three has been added!