Fortune Teller
"Say," Rainbow Dash says, the sun warming her as she lies in the long grass, "You think we can stay like this forever, AJ?"
"How do y'all expect me to know?" she replies contentedly. "Ah'm no fortune teller, Dash."
"You're right. I sorta wish we could, though. Just us two," Rainbow Dash says, and rolls over to look at her. Her face is surprisingly close.
"Thank ya. I feel the same about-" Applejack says, and stops awkwardly. A moment passes.
"We never had this conversation," Rainbow Dash says, looking away.
"Agreed," Applejack replies.
But, she kind of wishes they had.
A few things here:
You say Rainbow Dash's full name in the narration quite a bit in this one, you could shorten it by using "Rainbow" or "Dash" by itself. Just a thought.
(I'm sorry, but I am on an Ipod as of now. I will read the rest of this, but I won't point out any mistakes or suggestions. It's just too difficult on this tiny contraption. I will, however, go back to this when I get on a computer much better suited for this.)
Anywho, how adorable =3