Whoa whoa whoa. You made a parody of Rosario + Vampire with FLUTTERSHY as Moka?... I haven't even read the story and I'm faving. Oh, and I bet Sunset Shimmer is Kurumi, isn't she? (there are too many similarities not to make the comparison!)
5462784 Oh, ok. It DOES say that characters are swapped based on looks and not personality, so I suppose Rainbow Dash would've been the best fit. I would've expected Maud Pie to be Mizore, but Rarity can kind of work... I guess. Twilight as Yukari is a good fit, though. I can only wonder who Kokoa and Ruby would be (Ruby could probably be Trixie (heh, as if) and Kokoa could be... Scootaloo?)
5543810 I actually changed my mind. With all of Yukari's boasting and overall attitude/character-development, I think it would be more fitting if SHE became Trixie and RUBY became Twilight .
5543844 Ok, I can respect that. Still, I can't believe I got SCOOTALOO right! Good thing for that somewhat unexplored theory that Scootaloo has actually been Fluttershy's sister/daughter.
5543877 It makes very much sense that Fluttershy and Scoots are sisters, or if they're just plain related. I believe that Flutters comes from a long-line of disabled or weak fliers, thus her and her sister, Scootaloo, obtained the bad gene as well. Although Scootaloo has nearly identical attitude as filly Rainbow Dash and just Rainbow Dash herself, they're still proven not be related. It can be much compared to the way Sweetie Belle and Rarity act. While Rarity is elegant and regal, Sweetie Belle remains playful and carefree. One last thing is their color similarities. Fluttershy has a yellow pelt and Scootaloo has orange. Fluttershy's mane is pink and Scoot's is magenta.
Also the gen 3 cutie mark similarity... I blanked this out because gen 3 scares me.
Haha never mind it's shit. My main problem with it is that it's all just a skin. It's just a pony skin over something that's already established with established characters that don't fit the role they're put in when they're friggin Discord! He's too arrogant to ever take any if this sitting down. I know you said they'd be OOC but the correct way to refer to this would "they're exactly as they are in show but you have to imagine they're the ponies I refer to them as" which is ridiculous to imagine. Can you honestly say that John De Lancie's voice honestly suits any of the words he's said in this fic so far? They're not meant for that voice. The way he looks, acts, talks and sounds is a far cry from the main character of this anime. I don't mean to offend really I don't. I just feel this kind of just taking the script to something and changing a few key words just isn't what story writing should be.
5544849 Fluttershy isn't too bad she just doesn't like to show it off. Scootaloo genuinely cannot fly. Quite a difference XD would suck for Scoots considering that she rarely is ever near Flutters in the show if your hypothesis is true
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Srsly. man. this crossover thing is too forced and phoned in.
Also, aren't you supposed to age up your main characters when you do a Mature story with the Sex category?
Oh man! I love Rosario+vampire alot keep up the good work my man!
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*Shrug* I didn't think it was that bad.
Not when there is no actual sex.
5440824 Thanks.
If Rosario + Vampire is your favourite anime, you should know that I have my own story on my profile.
5441783 ... So because I like this anime, I automatically have to know that you made a similar story?
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Sorry, just thought you'd be interested.
5441876 Perhaps I'll read it later.
5441879 I LOVE Rosario + Vampire ITS AN AWESOME ANIME THIS IS GOING TO BE AWESOME
5442312 Thanks. Hope you enjoy.
you stole my Waifu with this fic :p
5444795 So sorry! I promise I'll find you a new one!
Whoa whoa whoa. You made a parody of Rosario + Vampire with FLUTTERSHY as Moka?... I haven't even read the story and I'm faving.
Oh, and I bet Sunset Shimmer is Kurumi, isn't she? (there are too many similarities not to make the comparison!)
5461891 Actually, Rainbow Dash is Kurumu. You can check my latest blog post for info on that.
5462784 Oh, ok. It DOES say that characters are swapped based on looks and not personality, so I suppose Rainbow Dash would've been the best fit. I would've expected Maud Pie to be Mizore, but Rarity can kind of work... I guess. Twilight as Yukari is a good fit, though. I can only wonder who Kokoa and Ruby would be (Ruby could probably be Trixie (heh, as if) and Kokoa could be... Scootaloo?)
5463206 Now that you mention it, I think I will switch Mizore to Maud Pie.
How did you guess Scootaloo was going to be Kokoa? Damn, you is good at this!
I haven't really decided for Ruby's character yet. But I suppose Trixie could work.
5543810 I actually changed my mind. With all of Yukari's boasting and overall attitude/character-development, I think it would be more fitting if SHE became Trixie and RUBY became Twilight .
5543839 That would make sense. But I like Twilight better as Yukari. :3
5543844 Ok, I can respect that. Still, I can't believe I got SCOOTALOO right! Good thing for that somewhat unexplored theory that Scootaloo has actually been Fluttershy's sister/daughter.
5543877 It makes very much sense that Fluttershy and Scoots are sisters, or if they're just plain related. I believe that Flutters comes from a long-line of disabled or weak fliers, thus her and her sister, Scootaloo, obtained the bad gene as well. Although Scootaloo has nearly identical attitude as filly Rainbow Dash and just Rainbow Dash herself, they're still proven not be related. It can be much compared to the way Sweetie Belle and Rarity act. While Rarity is elegant and regal, Sweetie Belle remains playful and carefree. One last thing is their color similarities. Fluttershy has a yellow pelt and Scootaloo has orange. Fluttershy's mane is pink and Scoot's is magenta.
Also the gen 3 cutie mark similarity... I blanked this out because gen 3 scares me.
Haha never mind it's shit. My main problem with it is that it's all just a skin. It's just a pony skin over something that's already established with established characters that don't fit the role they're put in when they're friggin Discord! He's too arrogant to ever take any if this sitting down. I know you said they'd be OOC but the correct way to refer to this would "they're exactly as they are in show but you have to imagine they're the ponies I refer to them as" which is ridiculous to imagine. Can you honestly say that John De Lancie's voice honestly suits any of the words he's said in this fic so far? They're not meant for that voice. The way he looks, acts, talks and sounds is a far cry from the main character of this anime. I don't mean to offend really I don't. I just feel this kind of just taking the script to something and changing a few key words just isn't what story writing should be.
5544849 Fluttershy isn't too bad she just doesn't like to show it off. Scootaloo genuinely cannot fly. Quite a difference XD would suck for Scoots considering that she rarely is ever near Flutters in the show if your hypothesis is true
If it were based on the manga, which was NOT merely pure fanservice, then I would probably finish this. As it stands... nope.
from the personality, I think I can tell who will be who, It's kinda easy to get it without reading it
5544849 i think u should make scoots cocra or is it cocoa u know moka sis
Omg i love mlp ant this anime omg your now my fav righter
Did not expect Discord to be the main character. This should be interesting.