Life is fun but not easy when born with tails and ears that you know not the origin of. But different or not, his adorable features make him a target to many mares. Unless two possessive ponies decide to make him theirs and no one elses.
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Good work mate
Is he really an antagonist which means enemy or did you mean protagonist which means main character in the summary
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Protagonist.
I didn't realize I mess that up there.
I will say this again, Luna needs to suggest limiting the Truth and Dare to JUST the mares at the sleepover, and Sweetie, and possibly Scootaloo and Applebloom, should agree, allowing to keep his relationships a secret from Celestia, and also keep her from trying anything with him under a dare.
So Leo is going to have more than one star ball? Can you link where you found that a kitsune can have more than one, because this is the first I've heard of the possibility. Or is this just for the story?
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http://www.mythicalcreaturesguide.com/m/page/Kitsune
This is just one of the sites I used for information.
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So don't take what I'm about to say as me telling you to change the story because that is not my goal, but I do want to correct you if you think that kitsune have more than one star ball. The section that talks about star balls in the link you provided says that kitsune have one star ball. I can see how you can get confused because the first time star ball is used it's plural, but that's because it was referring to multiple kitsune, not just one. In the same paragraph it mentions how a star ball is a kitsune's prized possession, meaning one. So ultimately in folk lore kitsune have one star ball, just to clarify, but feel free to correct me if you have more evidence, I'm always up for learning more about my favorite mythological beings
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Oh, I am well aware. I just though of nine would suffice in the development of those who Leo trusts and offers them as a symbol of said trust.
Or later in the story, as a testament of feelings to certain ponies.
Do not take this as a another chapter, it is a maybe. But I figure Blueblood kidnaps and dumps Sweetie Belle into the forest and she uses the starball as light and a beacon, thus Leo comes to the rescue just before the first monster comes in and chomps at her.
Hence it drags into the real power of Leo in his fox form when he fights said villain, but mistakenly falls to his instincts and creates a path of destruction.
Reason being is Amaterasu never taught him how to control his instincts and he goes on a rampage against said monster.
Just a maybe though. Not sure on making that chapter yet.