I dont want to go
"Rarity do I have to go?"
"Oh come now, Sweetie Belle. It will be fun! Apple Bloom, Scootaloo, and that little colt I see you stare at so often will be there " Rarity let out a small giggle. Sweetie's face turned as red as the fire ruby necklace Rarity was wearing.
"Button's just a friend of mine." Yeah just a friend . . .. While it was true that Button was her friend, she couldn't help but think of how cute he was, with his little propeller cap and love of video games. Truth be told she wanted nothing more than for Button to be her special somepony. If her face was red before it was now as red as Apple Bloom's hair. She would have been over the moon about spending time with him at a Heart's Warming Eve party had it not been for the host of said party.
Sweetie sat on her bed reading. she was so focused in her book that the knock at her door made her jump a little.
"Sweetie Belle could you be a darling and get the door for me please? I need to finish this dress." Rarity gets too wrapped up in her dress making . She stopped and marked her place in her book than trotted down the stairs . When she opened the door she was greeted with a hated yet familiar sight. Diamond Tiara stood there holding a bright red envelope.
"Oh hi there Stinky Belle" Diamond wrinkled her nose in disgust .
Sweetie rolled her eyes at the remark. "What do you want Diamond"
Diamond passed her the envelope. " Daddy is hosting a Hearts warming Eve party and he made me invite you and rarity" Diamond scrunched her face up even more.
" Thanks. But I think I will . . ."
The end of Sweetie's answer was never heard, as Rarity came to the door, and gently pushed Sweetie out of the way " Oh a Heart's Warming Eve party how wonderful! Please do tell your father we will be more than delighted to attend." Ignoring the look of shock and anger on her face, Rarity took the envelope and walked back upstairs to start a new dress.
Diamond smirked and started to trot away " Happy hearths warming eve" She pretended to throw up "Stinky belle".
"Rarity please! All Diamond is going to do is make fun of me."
Rarity had finally had enough. She put down her make up and glared at Sweetie belle. " Sweetie Belle Diamond Tiara and Mr.Rich have already showed us enough kindness by inviting us. Now please stop whining." Rarity looked at her hurt expression and sighed. "Sweetie, I know you and Diamond are not the closest of friends, but it's Heart's Warming Eve, this is the one time of year when we all get together and put aside our differences. So please try to get along with Diamond please".
"Okay rarity I'll try" she sighed. I'll do it for you.
Rarity looked down at her. " Thank you Sweetie you really are growing up you know." Rarity looked up at the clock ," Oh! Sweetie we have to leave for the party soon. Here let me brush your mane." Rarity took the brush and began to run it through Sweetie's mane.
After finishing dressing up for the party, Sweetie and Rarity left and started to trot towards Diamonds mansion.She looked up at her big sister "Rarity?"
Rarity looked down at her. "Yes, Sweetie?"
She sighed " do you really think Diamond will be nice to me".
Rarity knocked on the door, then turned to sweetie. " I think she will." The door opened, but it wasn't Diamond at the door. It was a brown earth pony colt with a propeller hat on.
Sweetie's cheeks lit aflame. She smiled shyly at the colt. "Hi Button Mash."
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A bit of sentences without punctuation. Good shipping and characterization so far, though!
Great start!
Yay good story so far
Hmmmmmm, I like where this is going.
Good story so far.. If you don't mind a few suggestions
If you really want to see the story intriguing (this is my OCD talking here) you should really put capitals in your chapters
Ex. "I Don't Want To Go"
Idk to me it seems more official
And put a little punctuation
Other than that the story is going pretty smoothly
Just for you to know this is just advise nothing critical
I see a lot of double spaces and no or incorrect punctuation some places. Also, some capitalization us needed. Other than that, I love this.