Omg I love this story all ready ^^

5851873 Not many people like the fetish of urine- which I use a lot in a few of my stories- and I bed they just dislike and not read it.

cant wait to reading the next parts great story. There are too less storys like this

5855978 Working on it as we speak

Great concept, poor execution

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5883594 Why do I always seem to find you commenting on my stories? I tried to ignore this for as long as I could but.... Srsly why my fics?

5904110 This is only the second story of yours that I've commented on. And I don't read just your fics. I read most of the stories in the watersports section of the watersports/scat ect. gorup.

If you'd like, I could post a list of everything I though was wrong.

Just saying you had an awesome idea, but... you could learn to write better.

5904240 Well that wont be necessary for the list. I'll keep with what I'm doing. To you it might seem like I'm doing something wrong but in my eyes it's as good as it can get.

are the next chapters coming soon?

5939229 One chapter will be coming soon! I just gotta find a good place to leave off before the next chapter starts