hoooo boy alright first things first you got your sentences wrong example of yours This is my first story . at the end of a sentence you dont put a space then a period you just put a period or question mark or whatever. the premise of the story is good yes but its a bit rushed but thats all i can see for now
hoooo boy alright first things first you got your sentences wrong example of yours This is my first story . at the end of a sentence you dont put a space then a period you just put a period or question mark or whatever. the premise of the story is good yes but its a bit rushed but thats all i can see for now